COMM 303 Exercise 4.7 in Stovall

Exercise 4.7 page 99 in Stovall

  1. Martin Goldsmith, general manager of the local public radio station said the stations goal is to raise $100,000 this year in order to buy more expensive programs for their audience.
  2. Marilyn Wall, president of the Walls Tire co., a locally owned tire manufacturer said that this past year has been good for the company, so they have been able to hire more employees.
  3. Marsha Moss, director of the local symphony orchestra said that last night’s audience was one of the best yet, and the orchestra enjoys playing for good audiences.
  4. Jerry Butts, member of the city council said they faced a tough decision regarding police raises which would in turn raise the property tax.

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One Response to “COMM 303 Exercise 4.7 in Stovall”

  1. dkois says:
    February 24, 2010 at 2:45 pm

    You lost a lot of detail, including numbers, from these paraphrases. You can still deliver data in paraphrase. Also, make sure you use commas after your descriptions of people, as well as before: “Jerry Butts, member of the city council, said…” 3/5.

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